Hell is not hell
It is purgatory
With endless breathlessness
Where you walk but do not move
Where you speak but do not echo
Where you are you but not
A mist mistaken for rain
A clock counting down to what end
A question without an answer
Hell is not hell
It is purgatory
With endless breathlessness
Where you walk but do not move
Where you speak but do not echo
Where you are you but not
A mist mistaken for rain
A clock counting down to what end
A question without an answer
Such an impactful poem with few words. A true, disturbing depiction of hell indeed.
I thoroughly enjoyed it very much. As always, looking forward to your writing. It would be amazing if you could check out my latest poem at betweenriceandrain.wordpress.com and leave a comment as well? Thank you very much and happy writing! (-: