my heart
is the size of a fist
that resists opening up
to hold your hand
it needs to fight
for there is only a little gate
of white picketed fences
to protect it
from other hearts
that punch harder
and could break a rib
or worse
a man
*
what’s the matter
is something on the mind
is it that your mind
is made of matter
and whats that
are mined to make
things matter
or is it that
you mind to matter
*
the snow was black
and the mountain red
and i was blue
in water
even though i
couldn’t swim
now
i am writing this poem white
remembering
*
oh earth
i am sorry
you cannot be sorry
and all i can do
for you is
use you more
for apologies later on
I especially like the first poem. I like how it tells a story and is to the point (no unnecessary or superfluous words). I also like the staccato effect made by short partial sentences: you get the sense of being punched.
thanks rainbowarc. hope the bruises healed.
It’s all good!