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Spaghetti knots

our first fight

who was milking the grey of those clouds where there we be

not doing it again like those birds that block the branches

that eat the scraps see the showers stuck as bathtubs

that too must suffer the fate of eroding to the human form

with whiteness praised the nails clipping the esophagus

look look dirt suffocates the place

she cannot come over when the bed is so messy

the fridge is a graveyard

why do the birds only poo on my windowsill

there they are walking like i do

there they are up early like i am

she knocks starting their leaving

a scared baby leaves one last pebble on the edge

that can destroy the leaking universe

found underneath the door

before she comes

and that will be the hardest for the storm

to wash off


About kacperniburski

I am searching for something in between the letters. Follow my wordpress or my IG (@_kenkan)


10 thoughts on “our first fight

  1. Really, really good.

    Posted by ACountryBoy | September 8, 2018, 4:43 pm
  2. Hi …kacperniburski.

    I hope we can be friends in keep in touch via here or email. I didnot know how to keep in touch to you cos there’s no email address yours. So via here 1st. Hopes it gets thru. Let my comments regard your writing be there at your post, but after READ IF CAN OMIT OUT my email address be good. Hope you will keep in touch , as friends online. Admiration much to your writings. Thankyou. Happy sunday to u guys. 😊😊

    Posted by MAY L . Leo, the Lion. | September 8, 2018, 10:08 pm
  3. Just wanted to say that I really liked this!

    Posted by therandomnessofbrilliance | September 9, 2018, 1:11 am
  4. Awesome 🌟

    Posted by muhonjanicole | September 9, 2018, 2:15 am
  5. Kacperniburski.Do u have any email address to send u new post ?Thankyou. Sept.09th2018.sunday.

    Sent from my Samsung Galaxy smartphone.

    Posted by MAY L . Leo, the Lion. | September 9, 2018, 2:11 pm

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