more
more than this
you must give me more
i am not armed for aimless love
for the faded sundays under lazy fans
the lukewarm spreading of a family cat
the dispassionate mumbling between a blanket and duvet and the needless needing by tea left alone in the microwave
i am equipped with years of me
of my love for love through love
of the kind of desire not found in plastic spoons
in the sweetened pick me up of stuck honey
or the smell of dried feet hung
against your breath after the dying morning
here i am
a mess of everywhere inside of you
here i am
an order of everything outside of me
waiting for you to use the world well by ultimately using it less
whisper it hold it on my tongue whole
there is still stillness left to do
and be done by
even as you move away
into the more
*
above is from a book of poetry i’ve written, entitled “a mess of you everywhere inside of me“.
it is for you. it is about you. it will tell you how to be you again. get a copy here: https://goo.gl/zsyqVD
a picture of what blooms below.

Beautiful Art xxx
Posted by ul128288955sarahsblog | September 17, 2018, 4:03 pmthank you!
Posted by kacperniburski | September 20, 2018, 11:27 pmYou are writing some exceptional poetry. This is really great stuff. I know how important my own poetry is for me, and that same commitment for honesty, depth, and excellence comes through your work. Carry On!!!
Posted by Fred | October 17, 2018, 8:14 pmtoo kind!
Posted by kacperniburski | October 17, 2018, 9:01 pmMind if I ask how you came across what I wrote? Just curious
Posted by fruslera | September 24, 2018, 6:28 pmfound it on wordpress – great stuff
Posted by kacperniburski | September 24, 2018, 7:14 pmK, I sent a comment by phone, but not sure it went thru, so repeating on the big screen…
I said:
Based on this poem alone, I may be in love with you. I am very interested in reading more & curious: might you be interested in bartering books? I can send mine … ??
I definitely want to read more, if I can find how to follow…sometimes in obscure places on the sites.
Thanks so much for putting your work out here where the world & I can get to it!
Best wishes, Carol B
Posted by cborsello | September 28, 2018, 12:08 pmha thank you! love to barter it. feel free to get mine and let me know where i can get yours.
Posted by kacperniburski | September 29, 2018, 4:29 amMay I send it to you? Need address…, can you contact at carbor1405@gmail.com to send address & we will put in motion. Can’t wait to read yours! Sorry not to reply so long, just found your reply…Still not getting everywhere on WP I want to go. Thanks!! Carol
Posted by cborsello | October 9, 2018, 10:25 amAnd I still cannot figure out where to click “follow”on your blog. so if you don’t mind, please enter that email in the right place cuz I want to continue seeing your work-play words! Many thanks! 🙂 Carol
Posted by cborsello | October 9, 2018, 10:47 amBeautiful poem. Well crafted. Anand Bose from Kerala
Posted by Anand Bose | September 29, 2018, 2:41 amthank you!
Posted by kacperniburski | September 29, 2018, 4:28 amReblogged this on silverapplequeen.
Posted by silverapplequeen | September 29, 2018, 5:16 amReblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
A MESS WORTH HAVING? 🙂
Posted by Jonathan Caswell | September 30, 2018, 5:15 pmLovely, I enjoyed your insight and words! Very well written and expressed.
Jodan
Posted by Jordan | October 4, 2018, 3:01 pmthank you kindly!
Posted by kacperniburski | October 4, 2018, 8:52 pmI like your style.
Posted by thelegendofstarthereturnofthemagick | October 5, 2018, 1:07 amand i yours!
Posted by kacperniburski | October 5, 2018, 8:49 amI love this poem. Thanks for sharing it (and for liking my latest post) 🙂
Posted by bonniemeekums | October 15, 2018, 1:38 pmThanks for taking time away from your writing to visit my blog!
Posted by lilyionamackenzie | October 15, 2018, 11:11 pmVery nice!
Posted by Sharon Mudra | October 17, 2018, 10:42 amthanks – check out the book if interested!
Posted by kacperniburski | October 17, 2018, 2:15 pmI really like the poem, how it gets under the surface of love. You definitely have talent to go forward and expand. Lots of talent.
Posted by tanya58 | November 4, 2018, 9:40 pmso kind!
Posted by kacperniburski | November 5, 2018, 8:47 amKacperniburski, I saw your liking on my recent poem about “The world we are. So, I took my time to run through some of your writings here and I find them interestingly beautiful. I’ll love to involve communication with you. Kindly message me on Whatsapp on +2348140878761 and let’s do send nice writing job together. I’m Peter Okonkwo’s
Posted by okonkwopeter81 | March 18, 2020, 5:52 amFlows like waterfall kisses! Good work 🙂
Posted by Kookoo | November 12, 2018, 11:41 amThanks for your reply and for using the word duvet. Good Poem! I love learning new words.
Posted by bobsmall1 | November 16, 2018, 5:30 pmIt has no time bound,a piece of 2018 but still tastes sweet.Great writer!!XX
Posted by edith ajambo | March 22, 2020, 11:04 amHow you write so beautiful
Posted by umarsofi | March 26, 2020, 2:36 pmHow do I get myself a copy of this poetry book?
This is pretty man. 🔥🌹
Posted by melaninheroine | May 25, 2020, 6:32 pmthat’s so kind: https://www.amazon.ca/mess-you-everywhere-inside/dp/1387942646!
Posted by kacperniburski | May 25, 2020, 7:53 pmThank you
Posted by melaninheroine | May 26, 2020, 5:36 am