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Spaghetti knots

a mess of you everywhere inside of me

more
more than this
you must give me more

i am not armed for aimless love
for the faded sundays under lazy fans
the lukewarm spreading of a family cat
the dispassionate mumbling between a blanket and duvet and the needless needing by tea left alone in the microwave

i am equipped with years of me
of my love for love through love
of the kind of desire not found in plastic spoons
in the sweetened pick me up of stuck honey
or the smell of dried feet hung
against your breath after the dying morning

here i am
a mess of everywhere inside of you

here i am
an order of everything outside of me

waiting for you to use the world well by ultimately using it less

whisper it hold it on my tongue whole
there is still stillness left to do
and be done by
even as you move away

into the more

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above is from a book of poetry i’ve written, entitled “a mess of you everywhere inside of me“.

it is for you. it is about you. it will tell you how to be you again. get a copy here: https://goo.gl/zsyqVD

a picture of what blooms below.
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About kacperniburski

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Discussion

35 thoughts on “a mess of you everywhere inside of me

  1. Co op report stuff's avatar

    Beautiful Art xxx

    Posted by ul128288955sarahsblog | September 17, 2018, 4:03 pm
  2. fruslera's avatar

    Mind if I ask how you came across what I wrote? Just curious

    Posted by fruslera | September 24, 2018, 6:28 pm
  3. cborsello's avatar

    K, I sent a comment by phone, but not sure it went thru, so repeating on the big screen…
    I said:

    Based on this poem alone, I may be in love with you. I am very interested in reading more & curious: might you be interested in bartering books? I can send mine … ??

    I definitely want to read more, if I can find how to follow…sometimes in obscure places on the sites.

    Thanks so much for putting your work out here where the world & I can get to it!

    Best wishes, Carol B

    Posted by cborsello | September 28, 2018, 12:08 pm
  4. Anand Bose's avatar

    Beautiful poem. Well crafted. Anand Bose from Kerala

    Posted by Anand Bose | September 29, 2018, 2:41 am
  5. Jonathan Caswell's avatar

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    A MESS WORTH HAVING? 🙂

    Posted by Jonathan Caswell | September 30, 2018, 5:15 pm
  6. Jordy's avatar

    Lovely, I enjoyed your insight and words! Very well written and expressed.
    Jodan

    Posted by Jordan | October 4, 2018, 3:01 pm
  7. thelegendofstarthereturnofthemagick's avatar

    I like your style.

    Posted by thelegendofstarthereturnofthemagick | October 5, 2018, 1:07 am
  8. Bonnie Meekums's avatar

    I love this poem. Thanks for sharing it (and for liking my latest post) 🙂

    Posted by bonniemeekums | October 15, 2018, 1:38 pm
  9. lilyionamackenzie's avatar

    Thanks for taking time away from your writing to visit my blog!

    Posted by lilyionamackenzie | October 15, 2018, 11:11 pm
  10. Sharon Mudra's avatar

    Very nice!

    Posted by Sharon Mudra | October 17, 2018, 10:42 am
  11. tanya58's avatar

    I really like the poem, how it gets under the surface of love. You definitely have talent to go forward and expand. Lots of talent.

    Posted by tanya58 | November 4, 2018, 9:40 pm
      • Peter Okonkwo's avatar

        Kacperniburski, I saw your liking on my recent poem about “The world we are. So, I took my time to run through some of your writings here and I find them interestingly beautiful. I’ll love to involve communication with you. Kindly message me on Whatsapp on +2348140878761 and let’s do send nice writing job together. I’m Peter Okonkwo’s

        Posted by okonkwopeter81 | March 18, 2020, 5:52 am
  12. redsucculent's avatar

    Flows like waterfall kisses! Good work 🙂

    Posted by Kookoo | November 12, 2018, 11:41 am
  13. bobsmall1's avatar

    Thanks for your reply and for using the word duvet. Good Poem! I love learning new words.

    Posted by bobsmall1 | November 16, 2018, 5:30 pm
  14. Carly's avatar

    I really have been enjoying your blog! Good articulating your ideas through words. 🙂

    Posted by Carly | December 4, 2018, 8:39 pm
  15. edith ajambo's avatar

    It has no time bound,a piece of 2018 but still tastes sweet.Great writer!!XX

    Posted by edith ajambo | March 22, 2020, 11:04 am
  16. umarsofi's avatar

    How you write so beautiful

    Posted by umarsofi | March 26, 2020, 2:36 pm
  17. melaninheroine's avatar

    How do I get myself a copy of this poetry book?
    This is pretty man. 🔥🌹

    Posted by melaninheroine | May 25, 2020, 6:32 pm

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