she says against the lonely sun
that she needs to work on herself
and then waits for my approval
though night comes too soon
and silently for me to respond
to her mouth that still hangs open
teeth like stars turning black
for no other reason
than the sweetness of the surrounding world
*
isn’t there something nicer to say
like the weather which still goes
and look how it has gone now
because we’ve been talking about things
that aren’t so great
and as a writer i know i should avoid
limping general words like so
because i really mean so so
so don’t hold me accountable in letting things slide
like this conversation that is still instilling stillness
and repetition with variation in trying to create a different reaction
but it’s the same pieces just jumbled differently
and not nice anymore
not good
not me
i made a mistake
isn’t there more than that
can’t there be
shouldn’t there be
for i don’t want to be much anymore
with the little slippery niceness around
though it could just be the weather
and the rain that will come
it always does
even when we don’t
wow this is an amazing piece, very touching xx